Sunday, August 2, 2009

THIS MORNING
I am shaving.
And the sallow-faced man next door is shaving.
And the man whose life will be changed when a girl talks
to him in the subway, and the president of Revco Steel—they are shaving.
And the man who will capsize in a boat today and breathe in the pure water
of the lake and gaze sightless up at the shimmering sun— he is shaving.
And the man who will commit murder today destroying the only love
he has ever known, though as yet his anger is still asleep,
and the man who will return from a day
hunched at his desk,
his hair falling over his ledgers,
and the man who before sunset will slice his wrists over the sink—they are all shaving
—over the upper lip,
under the sloping jaw,
lathered face and razor in the mirror
but no revelations there...no hint today.
We will walk out to the cool morning
where newspapers whirl in the wind,
out to the street that holds the buildings together.
But the premonitions are not quite strong enough—
they rise to the pure darkness of space
or lie beneath the slow wheels of a train.
Dark fears are still asleep in the blood as we walk our ways
and there is no unusual animal behavior
to warn of the earthquakes to come.


-----john dickson +august 1 2009



in order to copy and paste this poem
i was forced to take it out of prose poem copy as it came to my blogspace
and rework the structure in something
of a poetic flow although quite probably not the one determined by the poet in the composition of this poem therefor it could be said i have appropriated this poem perhaps misappropriated this pome
i place it here as a way of honoring
a man who wrote poems lived worked and died
in spite of the linebreak editing enforced by the medium in which i now write i think the pome reads as a good one
and should be read
out loud

10 comments:

stu said...

Have you ever seen, "Run, Lola, Run?" Or "Rashamon."

Not the same, no, not the same. But not entirely different, either.

jh said...

stu
i don't know either
run lola run or
rashamon

my reading is generally defined by a few narrow themes at any one time
i get on to an author and i can stay with him/her for a year or more

and i read in fits and starts
sometime i have three or four books going sometimes i just leaf through a poem or am into reading poems out loud and that might be as literarly as i get one day

are the poems you refer to here by john dickson
i don't know that much about him
i have come across a pome here and there and i like them
now that he's done his earthly work perhaps i can dovte a few days attention to him
he strikes me as a very fine wordwright

j

jh said...

i just realized you're talking about films
i am cinematically illiterate
i do know about the 7 dreams of kurosawa and derzu uzala
the other film i do not know at all
i'd like to take more time for films
just take time t get literate
but i get bored
sometimes i'm surprised by how much i enjoy films
recently i saw a australian film
tracker
i liked it a lot

j

stu said...

Yes, both movies. I'm not a big movie watcher, but I do try to keep an eye out for the unusual.

Run, Lola, Run, is a story told three times, with apparently trivial differences at the beginning of the story that cascade into very different outcomes, even for incidental characters.

Rashamon is a single story (a rape and a murder) that is recounted by several different people, but no two accounts can be reconciled with one another.

Run, Lola, Run is closer in spirit to "This morning," in that both take the perspective that life is chaotic in the technical sense that imperceptible differences in initial conditions can play out in finite time into extreme differences.

Kirby Olson said...

Good poem, who is John Dickson?

I saw parts of Run, Lola, Run. My daughter's name is Lola.

I never finished it in toto, but wondered what on earth, so now that Stu told me what's going on, I get it.

I'm in Philadelphia doing research for a book about Marianne Moore.

Very humid here, and the frogs are croaking all night in the suburbs, or is it crickets.

I think they are talking to one another out there.

Spent the day at the King of Prussia mall. Strange name for a mall. It has 400 stores.

Only thing I thought about buying was a book called What IF? a book of historical speculation. I read the chapter on What if Luther had been killed at the Diet of Wurms, and the historian said Cain and others would still have stepped up, but the Protestant Revolution wouldn't have been nearly as clear. Luther wrote 60,000 pages, I think was the number.

And America would not have been Protestant, a global calamity, since there would have been no ideal of religious freedom enshrined in the 1st amendment.

Fun to think about. Editor was Cowley or Crowley.

It was on the Bargains table for 9,95, but I lookd in Amazon, and it was only 2.08.

Much harder to shave int he Middle Ages. Infections mattered a lot more.

Close shaves now don't mean as much.

stu said...

Spent the day at the King of Prussia mall. Strange name for a mall. It has 400 stores.

I lived in Havertown from '60 to '69. I remember going to King of Prussia, but it must have been a lot smaller then. It was your basic two level mall. According to Wiki, the Mall is named for the area, and the area is named for an 18th century inn.

jh said...

i'd be interested to know
how a mall got that sort of name
i mean here we have mall of america
and it sounds really lame next to
king of prussia
who named that mall anyway

j

Craig said...

My dad's ancestors told the census taker they were from Prussia in 1860 and 1870, but in 1880 they decided they'd rather be from Germany. I think it has a nicer ring than Bismarckia.

The ship manifest issued in Hamburg in 1856 for my great great grandparent's voyage had them listed as Preufsen, but I had trouble with the handwriting and took it to be Greufsen. I found a town in Thuringia called Greufsen and asked their town webpage for some clarification. It's close to Erfurt and was where Novalis wrote his opus 'Heinrich von Ofterdingen' when he was hanging out with Schilling, Fichte and Goethe. He kind of stood out because his father, a von Hardenburg, had a title in Saxony that made him nominally Prussian. The folks in Greufsen had grown up East German so their English was limited, but they were real helpful in going over that manifest with me. Turns out Napoleon went right through downtown Greufsen on his way to Prussia, so I think the old script and the variations in spelling were a problem for him too.

Kirby Olson said...

I'm sure we could wiki the whole story, but it's so hot and humid, it's hard to care. Von Steuben perhaps addressed his troops there, or something.

Let's just make up the reasons for the mall's name, and see if we can redistribute our fanciful notions among the electorate like lite beer with a touch of mint, or whatever you're having.

jh said...

historically st johns abbey is very connected to the prussian movement into the USA we have a dining room or what once was a dining room or still is only changed anyway it used to be called the ludwig von Saal dining area...the whole benedictine mission from pennsylvania down the east coast and out to the midwest and beyond was financed in part through the royal prussians

one balmy slow afternoon the king of prussia stepped off a fairy and walked as if he knew exactly where he was going this was in philadelphia i tell you and he walked and walked and walked until he came to a little knoll and said quietly i claim this tiny knoll for prussia and he stuck a cake flag in the ground marched around it a few times and spat
people were so impressed they called it the king of prussia knoll forever until just recently when they build a mall there...they being the folks who take care of all that stuff

yeah
that sort of works